untold warren
rain freckles tapping against the window
clouds tint the sky silver
too gloomy to see
too loud to notice
she hides away behind a wall of grey
too embarrassed to show
how she talks and feels
how she laughs and cries
rainfall trickles to a stop
clouds reveal the hollow sky
and still the sun stays behind the glass
as it did not want to be seen
daring glen
Great work keep it up
boreal cradle
rain freckles tapping against the window
clouds tint the sky silver
too gloomy ...
Nice imagery, sammy. I'd just say, if possible extend it, I can't help but feel there's some message that's lacking. Keep writing. 💜