Creature

[torn crystal]

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[regal parcel]

Damn the depth i this piece is awesome
Lonely one wanting to be carried by an empty one
Damn such an amazing concept!

[jagged kraken]

thank you so much for the kind words!!

[regal parcel]

My pleasure!

[pure vale]

I love how your every poem have depth and like something so deep i wonder if there is word made to explain that deepness. And yet it tells how every human/creature is stupid cuz ultimately all creatures desires love at one point in their life.

[jagged kraken]

to desire love from someone who is empty but kind, that was the meaning behind this poem.

thank you so much for the kind words!!

[pure vale]

Always.

[unreal marten]

how awesome that i embody both the creatures

Love the poem

[jagged kraken]

so true

[jagged kraken]

i'm glad!!

[unreal marten]

ayo how do know

[jagged kraken]

i mean relatable 😭

[unreal marten]

ohh😭

[zealous mulch]

You always write such relatable poetry goddamnit! This poem reminds me of Saadi’s “Bani Adam” (heck all of your poems kind of remind me of “Bani Adam”). Beautiful writing ❤️

[jagged kraken]

i've never read that one. i'll check it out. tysm for the feedback!!

[zealous mulch]

It’s a really good poem that will definitely change your perspective on humanity

or reinforce it

[turbid ferry]

this is definitely among your better works, the way you word the poem just makes it feel barren and otherworldly