THAT'S WHY YOU ARE IN MY LIFE | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

gritty coral Apr 30, 2026, 5:52 AM

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I have gained this companionship with you, O Beautiful One, O Beautiful One!

My body has become sacred, my heart has become blessed — O Beautiful One, O Beautiful One!

My two eyes, filled with light, have blossomed in enchantment,

In the sky of my heart, the breeze has slowed down, filled with fragrance — O Beautiful One, O Beautiful One!

By the touch of your color, my consciousness has been dyed,

By your nectar of union, my life remains filled.

In such a way, take me and make me new within yourself,

In this very birth, you have brought about my cycle of life after life — O Beautiful One, O Beautiful One!

                                                                                      ------RABINDRANATH TAGORE

fathom maple Apr 30, 2026, 7:01 AM

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It's so beautifully written, I love the unique idea of coloring/dying their consciousness rather than an aspect of their life I guess? Typically in writing I never see color being used to depict changing another person in this way and I am loving it so much. Super well done!!!

gritty coral Apr 30, 2026, 7:04 AM

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fathom maple It's so beautifully written, I love the unique idea of coloring/dying their cons...

awww thank you soo much for ur feedback!!!!!!!!

#THAT'S WHY YOU ARE IN MY LIFE