Kitchen Words

[muted bear]

wow such a nice imagery

try cutting down a few repeated ideas like “stuck” and multiple rage descriptors and insteat make a powerful one...

or rather increase their intensity 😄

[brisk hornet]

Honestly I love the vibe of this, it's so domestic, the use of fridge beep and egg stained plates is brilliant imo.
My interpretation of this poem is that it's about emotional debris, just like how the kitchen is cluttered with bits and stained plates that need scrubbing, the relationship is cluttered with innocent justification and words neither person wants to hear.
Maybe it's about how unpleasant love feels when you're in the middle of a war of unspoken words and that's very relatable.
I personally really like the second stanza of this.
For the criticism part, "squeezing you up" feels a little clunky also the ending feels a little passive compared to the rest of the poem and the jump from the spool part to kitchen feels a little abrupt. Other than that, I really liked it!

[modest rampart]

Wonderful! @brisk hornet has just progressed to level 6!