#Lipstick Stamps
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Its very
idk how to explain
like its so magnetic
the imagery is so vivid
this is definitely one of the best poems i read this year
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Thank you, that means alot.
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I would say I am quite pleased to stumble upon this.
Honestly, there is this beauty in describing an act such as smoking and drinking like a love triangle of sorts, almost a play of romance.
Very unique and creative piece of poetry, different from most in a good way.
It has what everyone calls good poetry:
"vivid imagery and unique metaphors"
However, the title could use a rename.
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Thank you for your comment, I will consider changing the title. If you have any suggestions, please do tell me.
"Another Love"
you don't touch fire, it burns and disrupts.
great poem!!
your writing is vivid. the way you describe the shaking hands, the perfume and the warmth spreading in the chest, it feels atmospheric and lonely.