Revenge part 2

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Hey guys would appreciate feedback

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[rocky wyvern]

Ah! Such raw emotions! How painful it is to read with every lines, seeing how things unfold.

This was beyond beautiful!

I want people to see your work

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[restive fjord]

um

[late karma]

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[mossy sundial]

comedy, thankyou for the notify thingy coz i feel blessed to read this

[dreamy inlet]

This feels really heartfelt ngl
Especially the second stanza
I don't have any critiques coz I like the imagery and the flow
Goodwork!...

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Have you read part one yet? #1493572441992331374

[mossy sundial]

I will now

[fossil crown]

DAMNN

you display emotions so well omg

[late karma]

That was fast