#Tale of A Carnation - Hydrae

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Tale of A Carnation - Hydrae

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gorgeous hydrae

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@gray rose

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Now she lingers—
somewhere between root and rot
between bloom and decay
Suspended
Unmoving
The seasons pass her by
without asking
And in the silence,
The words remain—
broken
insane
never the chosen

Great contrasts, I like the emotional imagery. very nice

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🔥

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lovely piece hydra

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very immersive

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and great use of lineations

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I'm honored

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no problem

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@pliant mango

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HYDRAEEE

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THATS SO GOOOD

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I LOVE IT

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Thanks Dina 🫂

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HYDRAE POEEEM

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Oh my goodness a poem by the hydration herself. Really good turn on the pastoral romance: sometimes roots do rot

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@random niche

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I love how u started

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i love when someone talks in flowers

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@dusk apex

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Alright now i regret not reading this earlier, it was lovely and i love ur story telling style.
Grt work hydrae chunkymonsterwhite
Well penned 🖊️

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@near kiln

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It's lovely mama Dbweep

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Okay nvm 💔 you might have been double pinged

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-# not my problem

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@wide edge

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@main iris

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THIS IS A MASTERPIECE

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THIS IS MY FAVOURITE ONE YET WHAT SORRY?

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Who told you that you can make such a wonderful and dynamic story Outta a simple carnation

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Thanks purple

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Okay so.... There is a desperation to this whole poem which leads to this beautiful but painful end... The flower just them being alone and lost...

I think there is such a wonderful intention with each, let's say arc, of this story?
The first passerby should be crucified cause I can see it as a story of someone who may have liked you and a friend, played it flirty only to leaving you to feel lesser than the flower....
Than the second ghosting of a person going for another girl again... All while they again seemed to lul you into a false sense of security? Like damn...

The 3rd one is the most tragic to me... Two people where no one was wrong except the way fate unravels with time and distance...

The 4th of the moon, is it weird I got the vibe of this being someone online? Maybe I'm reading into it too much but alas... I love that you can feel the distance within this love?

Now we come to the gardener, this one actually pmo, gah damn... Bro lulled you into such false security... And like the final blow truly uprooted you to rot... I just love/hate that this was the final blow to what left you feeling broken and never chosen...

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