#myopic arrow: ars poetica

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cobalt shell
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*The arrow thrusting out
in a humming spin—
beak lancing the dark,
sting of cool wind heating
to a burn I cannot aim.

All round the page circling.
Ringing the view.
Streaking a thin trace
at the split seam—
a vermillion that whirls
without seeing where.

Bloody scour
out of the wood-comet,
streaks run from the creek.

Clefting the fog
as it closes back
leaving a mob of red mist

I drive it now—
the crackling eye
of the waking dark.

Red from the evening cry.
Dew sloughing off my body,
stripped of skin by
a single assuring arrow.

I, bone-stark,
strike the dark—
the canvas bleeds weep
unravelling the unseen

The bloody wake melds
what was already clotting.
Rousing the morning

I am to enter.

Flushed pink viscera,
awakes in new breath
rising, pulsing.
It throbs for release.

I, the suicidal stick,
lunge into the wound,
brace as it blooms
out the narrow spot

I will not survive.

Founder at heaven's yawn.
Cavitate into the rive.
Gyre toward sunrise dissolution.

The white sky page
baths in my crimson hues.*

long epochBOT
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valid pilot
cobalt shell
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# cobalt shell *The arrow thrusting out in a humming spin— beak lancing the dark, sting of cool...

Oh wow.
First of all the first read itself shows just how many complex metaphors there are whether through visual imagery or other poetic devices.
The central metaphor through the arrow takes us through this journey of transformation making us ponder upon subjects like life and death their cyclical nature.
I love the imagery I cannot stress enough. The personification of the arrow and then the environment surrounding it. Great work

wraith vessel
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this was a nice poem man, I loved the title and the diction throughout 👏