Withered Heart

[astral ginkgo]

maybe my saddest one yet, tho it is the one that resonates with me the most and is the truest to me.

[digital adder]

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[astral ginkgo]

after 'shut me out, shut me out' it's meant to be a full stop tho mb

[toxic flare]

I LOVE THE REPEATING LINRS WHST

[astral ginkgo]

TYTY

[gritty gorge]

It is incredibly beautiful @astral ginkgo , I don't see no changes to be done. Except, js be mindful of punctuations and captial letters. Either ways, it good ;)

[astral ginkgo]

i intentionally kept it all lowercase because i like how they look. tysm for your feedback!!

[loud nimbus]

Love the rhyming scheme in this one. It expresses that emotion of feeling you've not been enough even after knowing you poured every bit of your heart, feeding their brain.

"I paid for your selfish sins.
Hollow within, hollow within.
How I wish I never let you in." Love this part, expresses that regret and remorse so well.

Goodwork!...

[astral ginkgo]

ty!!

[loud nimbus]

Love the repeating lines as well
Fun to recite yk
Get this recited in the vc

[astral ginkgo]

i might soon

[loud nimbus]

Yessir