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lethal frost Apr 3, 2026, 4:34 PM

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📎 converted_text.pdf

storm condorBOT Apr 3, 2026, 4:48 PM

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fading sigil Apr 3, 2026, 4:54 PM

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Words trickle into my ken, flowing to my pen,
Inking on page blank an image of her—of peace—"

these two lines are so good

also "tincture" I have a love for that word, it rolls off the tounge very well good to be reminded of its existence. also the usage of the word is very good. Because its a word u dont encounter often you do remember the phrase is repeated in the poem. Its a memorable word.

In garments woven of mist and shadow—" another good line here

I dont quite get what it refers to cuz I lowk dont know anything about mythology but I did enjoy the imagery and the story-like pace ^^ good poem

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I think my favorites were the first two acts

lethal frost Apr 3, 2026, 5:26 PM

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@mystic phoenix
@broken ginkgo

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@inner gale
@spark ocean

broken ginkgo Apr 3, 2026, 5:36 PM

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Mathpie

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I love you😭

lethal frost Apr 3, 2026, 5:40 PM

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broken ginkgo I love you😭

Thank you.... Me 2

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How is it?

broken ginkgo Apr 3, 2026, 5:44 PM

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lethal frost How is it?

Its so good

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so so good

spark ocean Apr 3, 2026, 8:02 PM

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“Her steps were as the hush that follows rain” I love this, as a rain enjoyer.
“vicissitudes” is such a lovely word as well, I really need to use that one
I just love “The Prince of a Shattered Sky”
I adore how this reads as a religious text, and the vocabulary is vast and powerful. You continue to amaze me with your works!! All this to say, this is SO good. No notes.

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