Heaven / Hell

[alpine lynx]

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[static topaz]

I love this construction

two sentences with a space in between

real good

also the writing is amzaing

[stiff helm]

gorgeous

[gentle owl]

it's basically 3 poems in one

[gentle owl]

ty!

[gentle owl]

tysmm

[lusty kite]

I appreciate how you've crafted three poems in one. The contrasting ones, hell and heaven are good but when we merge the two to get the third one, that's where we lie. Neither heaven, nor hell, somewhere in between, figuring it out!...

[gentle owl]

contrapuntal poetry is my 2nd fav style. ty for the feedback <3

[lusty kite]

I like it as well
I usually go for the birth and death themes on contrapuntal style

Heaven and hell feels good ngl

[outer hollow]

Beautiful.

[gentle owl]

contrasting themes work best

imo

[gentle owl]

ty!

[outer hollow]

Ifc!

Ofc!*

[gentle owl]

I'd appreciate if you could leave a star!

[outer hollow]

I left a heart, but sure. I can do both.

[gentle owl]

the only reason i ask for that is because poems with 16 stars get featured on #⭐・starboard so ty!

[outer hollow]

Oh of! I got you.

[gentle owl]

@keen oriole

[keen oriole]

Yh buddy

[inland geyser]

oh my god bro

i like how to narrative is free flowing but it also delves into deep territory of meanings and metaphors

damn gng, this is fire

[gentle owl]

means a lot coming from an S tier poet like yourself man

[zenith anvil]

is there any poem where you don't miss? i think this is your best work so far really love it. lol had me reading it line by line too 😭😭

[viscid lily]

Not my particular mug of leaf water 😭

[gentle owl]

tyty

[gentle owl]

that's valid lol