#Darling

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sterile oasis
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Baby, I ache when I miss you
All I want to do is kiss you
Make me busy, darling, like never before
Give me something so I can be reborn.
Keep it busy, keep it alive
Keep the wind blowing like a four-hour ride.

I'm cold darling, won't you warm me with your fire?
Darling, you're my only desire.
Say something, blow my mind
It's so worth it, we lose track of time.
You're the light, and I need you, baby.
Oh I see a spark, between us two, baby.

Put out my fire, and then hold me
Don't cut the wire to unfold me.
Be there for me, lead me your castle
Don't leave darling, stay strong in the battle.
Darling, when we both get stuck you know
I'll pull you out, I won't ever let you go.

I know you'll be there too, in the ride
I'd just keep holding on, when it gets heavy inside,
We'll stay together, through thick and thin
I've found the treasure, in your skin.
Your embrace I felt when I had nothing else to feel
And you saved me, with love so unreal.

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calm estuary
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?rm 1day read darling

fiery knollBOT
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Alright lynnisanangel, I'll remind you in 1 day about:

read darling

teal river
sterile oasis
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i really appreciate it

teal river
sterile oasis
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@mortal zinc
@hasty marlin i added in a few lines
@teal river

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tell me if i need to revise something coz idk if it's shit or not

hasty marlin
mortal zinc
sterile oasis
sterile oasis
sterile oasis
teal river
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This line added more depth to it and kinda highlighted the fact that they're the only one in this world full of people.

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I don't think you need to revise anything further.

hasty marlin
sterile oasis
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@fervent cliff

sterile oasis
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@ripe shale

ripe shale
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reading rn

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tbh i dont really like this poem much, some imagery is good the repition of baby or darling and prephas the directness it feels bland to me. its not that i dont like directness i just feel there needs to be more falovr in this poem

sterile oasis
ripe shale
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aha sorry dave

sterile oasis
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it's really much of a lyrics than a poem ngl

ripe shale
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yeah i like some of the ryhme here

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like keep it busy keep it alive and four hour ride

sterile oasis
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though the poem is talking about something else

ripe shale
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all this directness poem in the server makes me wanna write direct too tbh

ripe shale
sterile oasis
ripe shale
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then?

sterile oasis
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can't say

ripe shale
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side eye

sterile oasis
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@tawny isle

sterile oasis
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@lilac sky

lilac sky
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WOW

sterile oasis
lilac sky
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I just read it

sterile oasis
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I really appreciate it

lilac sky
sterile oasis
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I really appreciate it

lost kettle
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dave in love poem era

sterile oasis
sterile oasis
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@tawny isle

willow frigate
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WhAt

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I just read the first half line

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holy moly

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I dont know which one to quote

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every line feels like its choosen with care

sterile oasis
willow frigate
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But id point out that darling, getting repeated twice sounds a bit off
And it speaks about the obsession
Same with baby in the next stanza

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If obsession is what you're aiming for then its good.

sterile oasis
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@exotic axle

sterile oasis
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  • something else
sterile oasis
exotic axle
sterile oasis
exotic axle
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Umm I'm a bit too confused

sterile oasis
exotic axle
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Where should I write mine now, in here

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?

sterile oasis
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or something you want read

exotic axle
exotic axle
sterile oasis
exotic axle
sterile oasis
exotic axle
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Umm I kind of have a thought spiralling, of making a new one named... Under the cave of your soul

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Umm I'll do soon mate 😜

exotic axle
sterile oasis
sterile oasis
exotic axle
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SobbinTheLanaDelReyOut thanks

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This means a lot to me

sterile oasis
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@sour aspen

sterile oasis
exotic axle
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@exotic axle

exotic axle
sour aspen
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so lyricy i like it

exotic axle
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I can't see any poem

sterile oasis
sterile oasis
exotic axle
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@sterile oasis ohh wow

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Wooowwwww

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This is soo good.... Man

sterile oasis
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i appreciate it

exotic axle
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It's like you are in pain at being departed from her, then you want to make sure the strongness of togetherness, holding each other

storm pierBOT
exotic axle
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@sterile oasis it's like a fantasy as I said

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Well done dear lord

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@sterile oasis Any other of your poems?

sterile oasis
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#1487663401889955962

exotic axle
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@sterile oasis it's like a whole new soul whispering a new shade of life

sterile oasis
sterile oasis
exotic axle
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@sterile oasis well.. you must have gone through it, cause the poem makes me feel that, which means you felt that too

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Niceee @sterile oasis

sterile oasis
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i appreciate it @exotic axle

exotic axle
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Not so formal ya, no need thanks , I appreciate your work, it's crafted

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@sterile oasis take care mate..

sterile oasis
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@exotic axle

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take care @exotic axle by bye

exotic axle
wide sky
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aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh

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so cuteeee

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like kicking in the air and giggling kinda cute

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thankyou for this masterpiece dave