#My body sleeps to invite a grim

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limpid turtle
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Collab with the lovely @willow portal

The sugar of my existence is to arrive,
I'll be the bitterness of her life
As the evening falls-
To hope, I'll be the night
No coffee will hold her from my realm
To gnaw on the likes of her
Is a dream come true

The traces of him on my skin feeble.
My body sleeps to invite a grim.
Being cautious so I don't subdue.
My exhaustion pulls me to him.
I get up in this bubble of his.
I see her in a distance.
I immediately know he is out to get.

A part of her embedded in me.
Gently carved in. A vessel like me
he impartially resides in to swoop
me over at his behest. A fight with
myself as the markings on me
string him along. I feel him up high
and I look up.
I now run with dread to save her.
I call her name as I reach her.
I tell her we need to escape
as I explain but I am meet with
distaste and anger.
My fault is to inhabit a monster.
As she walks away, I follow her
to plead with her to understand.

You are so good to me
To feed me with such a desperate sight
You, following her like a shadow casted
By the darkest of lights; The rays of truth,
chasing you down while you scurry behind
the mellow hope that's been telling you-
Step out now

I call to him and say with her I can
just be. Be with her with a true smile
on my face. I think to myself without
her the bitterness does dissolve me.
As long as I can watch her, or gain.
I will be happy to just be in her sight.
I will be the sweetness. She can pick
anything from me. A deal he wants
but he shall not get it.

I reach my hand out
And you just swat it away?
For now, have it your way
Bore reality, after all, this is...

Just a dream, that's all it was
"Just" is excessive, dear
Night after night, our tango will last...

zealous wingBOT
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@limpid turtle has sent a notification! - @sly latch @oak zealot @sharp cobalt @warm lily @willow portal @terse ocean

sharp cobalt
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TWO GOATS IN ONE

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marvelous

limpid turtle
sharp cobalt
zealous wingBOT
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@willow portal has sent a notification! - @limpid turtle @lilac cave @oak zealot @weary plinth @somber turret

oak zealot
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2 notifies </3

lilac cave
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Ohh goddamn

willow portal
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Duck, you're like lightning

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Wth

oak zealot
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lol

lilac cave
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Damns, it takes two to tango indeed

weary plinth
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such a masterpiece

lilac cave
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It's a goddamn masterpiece, no? The flow was smooth with a little bumps while reading it, with this as an example:

"A fight with myself as the markings on me string him along. I feel him up high"

Is it a pause? Another feeling that you want to happen?

Disregarding the bumps, it has great imagery, almost every sentence has it. Like smearing it all over our eyes.

willow portal
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She does have one hell of a talent with imagery, should I tag you at one of her most recent ones? I believe you'll be all over it like I was