#Nylon

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quaint tusk
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I just hope the nylon rope
is better than the polyester one,
because In life, I cannot cope,
I gotta end it fast and then I'm gone.

I thought I could get through pain—
By avoiding them all throughout my life.
But now everything has come to shame,
There's only one way out of this strife.

I planned to fix my posture—
I tightly tied a knot and wore it steadily.
In life, I'm my own imposter,
So I agreed to hanging readily.

Grieving, it all leaves me painless,
When I'm driving aimlessly.

Shaking up the bottle,
Foaming up my mouth when—
All I wanted was truth,
All I wanted was life.

Meaningless the party,
Meaningless in strife.

Head bent, my feet are—dangling slowly,
Creaking in the ceiling,
Ropes are—pulled in—gently
Face is void of value,
Face is void of—life.

elfin thistleBOT
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elfin thistleBOT
wanton lion
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yeah bro

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wanton lion
shut lichen
quaint tusk
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shut lichen
quaint tusk
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js doin ntn

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tyfa

wise spindle
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yo dwag

quaint tusk
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hru?

wanton lion
quaint tusk
wise spindle
quaint tusk
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I'm js doin things ig

wanton lion
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yeah man good 2 tlk 2 u

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gn bro

quaint tusk
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quaint tusk
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jk

shut lichen
wanton lion
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bet

quaint tusk
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ima delete this thread later

wanton lion
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lol

shut lichen
main auroraBOT
quaint tusk
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shut lichen
tender bramble
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school

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quaint tusk
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wait what if i edit this

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the change it to

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an actual poem

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or just leave the upper oart

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velow a poem of another poem

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😭

shut lichen
shut lichen
quaint tusk
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people will have no idea of what this used to be

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I'll do it later

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whwn I'm not lazy

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im lalzy still do maybe later lol

shut lichen
quaint tusk
shut lichen
quaint tusk
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@wanton lion @opal zenith @idle island

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@unreal grove

wanton lion
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uhnnnnn

idle island
wanton lion
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whatttt

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you already tagged meeee

quaint tusk
quaint tusk
unreal grove
wanton lion
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what the fuc-

quaint tusk
quaint tusk
unreal grove
unreal grove
quaint tusk
unreal grove
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Lol u guys trolling ppl 😭

quaint tusk
quaint tusk
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btw

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i like men

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jk

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vagrant goblet
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You're funny for the title changes

quaint tusk
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Nylon

unreal grove
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Damn niceee

main auroraBOT
quaint tusk
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@stuck token

stuck token
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2nd stanza add ONLY . THERES ONLY ONE WAY OUT OF THIS STRIFE. This adds higher stakes.

Another tweak that id make is , in the last 3 stanzas , id add a lot more punctuation to mimic the shortness of breath they would realistically be experiencing, in this situation.

Other than that the poem is very well written.

quaint tusk
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@high raven

round tartan
quaint tusk
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i really appreciate your feedback, thx for readin it

round tartan
quaint tusk
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but things are not going so well rn

round tartan
brittle fractalBOT
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*Dw, you

will get through it, rm it

is just a bad patch*

- mppps05
quaint tusk
quaint tusk
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@quartz kernel

quartz kernel
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tho the intended meaning of the poem must be different from what i understand

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idk man

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the line which hit me hardest was

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"I thought I could get through pain—
By avoiding them all throughout my life."

brittle fractalBOT
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*"I thought I could get

through pain— By avoiding them

all throughout my life."*

- tiol0708
quartz kernel
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Haiku

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i didnt write it haiku

vital rampart
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Woah ts is a really deep poem

quaint tusk
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i appreciate it very much

quaint tusk
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@proper sandal

proper sandal
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you describe and evoke emotion very clearly, which is an amazing skill, but are you okay? sometimes poetry can act as something for the writer to process their emotions through, which i get, but death overall is a complex, sensitive, and serious topic

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don’t need to answer if you don’t want to lol

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quaint tusk
proper sandal
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@acoustic jackal

acoustic jackal
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the imagery is nice it's very well written