#Alone

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quaint current
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My rose tinted glasses broke
Shattered like the trust I gave
To all my suitors
Gifted me a plastic rose
And I mistook it for a flourishing seed

Desperately clinging for the clues in-between
If I try and look any closer it won’t be glasses I need
Need a thousand magnifying glasses to fulfill my greed
For something substantial
Farm raised salmon
Not Mcdonalds meat

And I feel so lonely
Yet so free
I need something different
To soothe the pain
I sit in my silence
And my tired shame
I need something different
Yeah I do
I need something different
And it can't be you

I need a distraction
From my fading youth
From the wounds in my soul
Shrieking for something new
I need some alone time
I guess I do
I can't help but thinking
I'm missing you

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mighty roost
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i love this poem, I get the feeling of being alone and feeling lonely longing for something, but also knowing my worth and that your not something to be taken advantage of

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great poem

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mighty roost
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it definetly in my opinion could be shorten

quaint current
mighty roost
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but im no expert

quaint current
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ill take it into account

mighty roost
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i think there is a lot of repition in it which is could but it feels more free worded not rhymy like in the beginning unless that what you were going for

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which is good*

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other than that i love the meaning

quaint current
mighty roost
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a wonderful peom

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poem*

quaint current
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🔥

quaint current
mighty roost
quaint current
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mecore i get it

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ill probably edit it

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its just i need to get it out first yk

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cuz im writing a poetry book

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well my second one

mighty roost
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dont edit i think you should do a part two about with a extended feel

quaint current
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i just published the first one

spare crater
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That's fire🔥

quaint current
crimson linden
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THIS IS AMAZINGGG

quaint current
left scroll
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My rose tinted glasses broke - such nice imagery here

quaint current