Her eyes (started as a vent, turned into a poem) (Ghazal)

[vocal plaza]

@tender widget @old sail @sick patrol @tepid pagoda @next dune @quick helm @warm palm @last karma (feel free to tag other people aswell)

@sleek ocean

Also thanks to @next dune for providing usefull feedback

[strange maple]

So cool! I wish someone dedicated this to me, it shows a lot of love and worry at the same time.

[vocal plaza]

Thanks, Where do you see worrying? Cuz I didn’t spotted that myself

[pastel forum]

*Thanks, Where do you see

worrying? Cuz I didn’t

spotted that myself*

- ieladjah

[next dune]

Awwww 💙💙

[zinc gazelle]

@next dune has sent a notification! - @polar jewel @untold dome @ornate idol @lavish parcel @pearl vale @quick helm

[untold dome]

bro this is very beautiful, so immersive. it shows ur dedication in love.

@vocal plaza

[vocal plaza]

yes, I realised it needs to be 14 syllables so I will have to fix it later but this is what I have so far, feel free to ping people because no one follows my poems (its my second one)

[untold dome]

@alpine pond

@glass canyon

[alpine pond]

It’s so beautiful to learn about young love

[sleek ocean]

This is so good. I'll love coming back here again and again to read. 100% you and your poem is cool.

[untold dome]

true

[vocal plaza]

It is quite fascinating, I hope I will experience young love from someone else once

[vocal plaza]

aw thank you

btw feel free to ping anyone you'd like to read this, im still kind of unknown here

[ornate idol]

Let me check

Oa

Where is the poem

[sleek ocean]

Up. I advertise.

WAIT HEH

[sleek ocean]

You deleted it??

[sleek ocean]

WHY DID YOU DELETE IT😭😭

[vocal plaza]

itsn ot dont worry

https://discord.com/channels/944439929734312006/1487192337628008468

POEM HAS BEEN MOVED