ROT

[crisp nymph]

this is sad, still good ! i liked the second part better, bc the only dark dot for me is the repition of "rot", i think it's a lot, but i felt the poem so hard i can't deny its very good

you can absolutely say its one of ur bests even tho i didn't read much of ur poems <333

[potent hedge]

ooh i was trying to repeat it actually haha

[crisp nymph]

oooh so it worked !!

[potent hedge]

thank youu ahh its a very old poem of mine but always just in my soul

[potent hedge]

it did haha maybe i should add more rots

i was thinking about dying in the woods and turning into a tree main idea btw

not ironically

[crisp nymph]

ure right i should post some my old ones too

[potent hedge]

id love to read it ping me

[crisp nymph]

maybe ?? in my way ig

[potent hedge]

on your way it iss

[crisp nymph]

btw im doing a collab with @/Honey sooo i'll ping you ??

[potent hedge]

yess okayy

[crisp nymph]

cool !! ^^

[potent hedge]

@dark current

@cloud marsh lookiee

[paper sierra]

You portrayed the 'overthinking' aspect very well. I love how the person is detached and attached at the same time

[potent hedge]

Thank you. Thats exactly what i was trying to portray. Also the subtle untertones of grief yet apathy too

[paper sierra]

Yeah I get and this is tough to portray so your execution is awesome
Keep up the good work!...✨

[dark current]

You should study Anaphora once in a while, so you can improve the repitition of words every noe and then

It's a good use of the rhetorical devices

The poem itself is amazing! Literally gives a food for thought kind of feeling

Intended to be curious if rotting would be much more useful than you living

Good poem!

[potent hedge]

Idk what that is but I will thanks!

[dark current]

It's now your friend