versed hollow Mar 24, 2026, 11:37 PM

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The Totem of God

https://discord.com/channels/944439929734312006/1472786057543028889 [Anthology Link]
Part III — "Sin of False Prophets"
[Symbolism Segment : Freemasonry]
I. The Sheaf of Corn — The Ravenous Sheep — https://discord.com/channels/944439929734312006/1485848981748846602
II. The Two Headed Eagle — No Such Brethren
III. The Sprig of Acacia — Of Righteous Wrath — https://discord.com/channels/944439929734312006/1486146984929919107
IV. The Masonic Working Tools
○ Part I
○ Part II
○ Part III
○ Part IV — Square — A Forbidden Tongue
○ Part V
○ Part VI
○ Part VII — Skirret — Possession of Material
○ Part VIII
○ Part IX
V. The 47th Position of Euclid
VI. The Hourglass
VII. The Two Pillars
○ Part I
○ Part II
VIII. The Royal Arch
IX. The Pyramid
X. The Eye of Providence
XI. The Blazing Star

By @versed hollow

novel vectorBOT Mar 24, 2026, 11:40 PM

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finite heath Mar 25, 2026, 10:00 AM

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Good poem but I think you missed some punctuation between clauses

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I like the anger good job

versed hollow Mar 25, 2026, 10:01 AM

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finite heath Good poem but I think you missed some punctuation between clauses

Thank you man I appreciate that, may you tell me where?

finite heath Mar 25, 2026, 10:02 AM

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And mercy why the godless name. I think the rhythm would work better with a comma

versed hollow Mar 25, 2026, 10:03 AM

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finite heath And mercy why the godless name. I think the rhythm would work better with a comm...

I think the line break allows for the reader to potentially have a natural pause on the enjambment

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I would correct it otherwise but to have a comma before "Of" feels weird to me

finite heath Mar 25, 2026, 10:04 AM

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versed hollow I would correct it otherwise but to have a comma before "Of" feels weird to me

Not before ‘of’ my bad I meant after why

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And mercy, why the godless name

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This or this:

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And mercy why, the godless name

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But anhyhow great poem

versed hollow Mar 25, 2026, 2:29 PM

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finite heath And mercy why, the godless name

I look into that thank you bro

tired eagle Mar 25, 2026, 7:10 PM

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Is this about using God's name in vain? Lol.

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I like it!

versed hollow Mar 25, 2026, 7:15 PM

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tired eagle Is this about using God's name in vain? Lol.

yess that could be an interpretation! but i did intend for false prophecy

tired eagle Mar 25, 2026, 7:17 PM

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That sounds cooler than what I interpreted.

versed hollow Mar 25, 2026, 7:19 PM

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tired eagle That sounds cooler than what I interpreted.

nooo thats still a good interpretation

tired eagle Mar 25, 2026, 7:20 PM

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Thanks! Lol.

versed hollow Mar 25, 2026, 7:22 PM

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tired eagle Thanks! Lol.

yeahh of course

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you know what, why dont you choose which poem i put out today? @tired eagle

tired eagle Mar 25, 2026, 7:23 PM

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What does that mean? Hehe.

versed hollow Mar 25, 2026, 7:26 PM

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tired eagle What does that mean? Hehe.

seeing the table of contents above, you may notice three poems that have no link to a post, and those are what i have yet to post. So I am asking you to choose which I should post this day if you would like 🙂

tired eagle Mar 25, 2026, 7:26 PM

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What an honor!

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Hmmm, let me see...

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What about... Tongue?

tired eagle Mar 25, 2026, 7:30 PM

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versed hollow seeing the table of contents above, you may notice three poems that have no link...

Does that work?

versed hollow Mar 25, 2026, 7:30 PM

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A Forbidden Tongue? yes!

tired eagle Mar 25, 2026, 7:30 PM

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Yayyy.

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Well, I'm gonna go to bed now, see you tomorrow! I'll read it tomorrow.

versed hollow Apr 1, 2026, 2:37 AM

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@drowsy sequoia Lo and behold

drowsy sequoia Apr 1, 2026, 2:42 AM

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Totem:
Thou so happen to possess,
A very own feeling, Yes,
That all that is, To connect,
Shalt wander into sin's bonnet.

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2 headed eagle:
Thine action shows, Colors,
Thy words do display,
For thou hath come to valor's,
Truly, very own stay.

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I have no words for The Righteous Wrath,
For all shalt seek repentance.

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Hey @versed hollow

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How did I reply?

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mecore

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Petting myself, No offense.

versed hollow Apr 1, 2026, 3:08 AM

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drowsy sequoia How did I reply?

Very poetically and complimentary 😊

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Thank you so much man! Do you write in archaic yourself?

drowsy sequoia Apr 1, 2026, 10:47 AM

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Sorry for the late reply, was in college.

drowsy sequoia Apr 1, 2026, 10:50 AM

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versed hollow Thank you so much man! Do you write in archaic yourself?

I write, have written a 100 poems separately and have made a book, just want a way to publish. Around 2/4 of it is archaic.

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But I wanted to be simple

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DM me pls

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