In spheres of compulsion I revolt;
my past actions speaking volumes
as another chapter of this book opens.
Contrary to constraint, freedom seeks
fabled minstrel showdowns – and I,
showmanship. Look within! Salt
and wounds refrain in chorus,
so blistering bigotry can entertain.
Tonight, I pick up my makeshift pen
with malignant intent.
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In spheres of compulsion I revolt;
my past actions speaking volumes
as another c...
go loaf go!!!
indigo saddle
go loaf go!!!
what
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hyping you up
about what 😭
cloud wadi
about what 😭
too many questions 😔
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HELL YEAH LOAF
tired yew
This is inspiring for me, I often want to paint with too many words or the whole thing feels forced. In short it shows me it can be short and impactful without a bunch of color. So ty.
I want to pull away from the normal admiration writing and have small pieces. This shows me, I believe, that I'm in a better direction than I thought.
Ps. Interpreting it feels like shots fired for my recent suggestions 😅
Great writing, honestly.
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This is inspiring for me, I often want to paint with too many words or the whole...
Awww thanks <3
indigo saddle
This is inspiring for me, I often want to paint with too many words or the whole...
I wanted to respond to this more but forgot
Its nice to hear youre being inspired by this! I find that bringing my poetry to extremes helped realize my thoughts on what, for me, counts as poetry clearer.
Limiting myself to as little as possible, and as much as possible. To strict form and complete freedom. Bare, minimalistic bones and maximalist typography.
Anything you write helps you hone out your style. Not everything will be a hit, but when missing, you know in which direction to shift your aim.
About the ps though, im not sure i know what you mean haha
tired yew
About the ps though, im not sure i know what you mean haha
It was just a joke Loaf lol
Again, it's very well written.
Ty for the encouraging words.
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It was just a joke Loaf lol
Again, it's very well written.
Ty for the encouragin...
I wish you luck on your poetic journey <33
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