Same Souls, Different Eyes - Asi & Pinak

[wise spruce]

I know I messed up everything I had,
But is the version of me in their head really that bad?
I’m still searching for the key, still waiting at the door,
But is it the same house I was once looking for?

I found the key, but I locked myself in.
Now I live in the shadow of where I’ve been.
You’re looking for closure, but I have the truth
And it’s a heavy, cold weight in the palms of my youth.

Surrounded by the ghosts of our past,
Wondering if I hadn’t said that, would it last?

You’re haunted by the ghosts, but I’m living in the shadow,
Of a truth that feels like a field left to fallow.

One of us trembles, one of us knows,
But we’re both just the cold where the fire once rose.
I have the answers, you have the "why,"
But the same heavy ceiling is our only sky.
Same soul, just bleeding through different eyes.

@tall adder @wise spruce

[bronze hearth]

HOLYYY

[rich skiff]

damn this is pretty amazing bro

[bronze hearth]

THIS IS AMAZINGGG

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[rich skiff]

ong

[bronze hearth]

I sneezed my bad chat

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[wise spruce]

😭

[wise spruce]

kzkkzz bless youu

[tall adder]

THANKS

[bronze hearth]

Must have been the wind 🍃

SERIOUSLY THOUGH THIS IS AMAZINGGGG

[wise spruce]

😭

[bronze hearth]

AHHH

[mellow plume]

Not gonna lie

[bronze hearth]

THIS IS SO GOOODODODODODODODDDDD

[mellow plume]

This reminds me of how I used to write in the past

I love it

Like the metaphors

And everything

The last line is very nice

Good poem

I feel like

Some rhymes were a bit forced

That's all

[tall adder]

noted

[mellow plume]

Ohh it's a collab

I noticed just now 😭

Good job guyss it's a good poem

[wise spruce]

will do better in the future

[wise spruce]

LES GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

[distant meteor]

So good u deserve a kiss

[tall adder]

yeah lmao

[mellow plume]

Hehe

Look forward to more like this

I genuinely felt so nostalgic it reminded me of my old poems

[wise spruce]

first ever and more to come hopefully 😭

[pastel pivot]

Very unique,
I think this is the first time I have read a house being a metaphor for past memories.
I like the last stanza the most, how it states the similarities and differences one after the other among the writer and whoever the writer is speaking too.
"i found the key, but I locked myself in"
i think that was deliberate, to finally face everything, the memories and all. beautiful writing.

[granite carbon]

@pastel pivot is now following @tall adder.

[pastel pivot]

oh so this is how the follow thing works

[wise spruce]

yess

[granite carbon]

@wise spruce is now following @pastel pivot.

[tall adder]

are we following each other

[granite carbon]

@wise spruce is now following @tall adder.

@tall adder is now following @wise spruce.

[tall adder]

hehehe

[wise spruce]

😭

SAME TIMEE

[granite carbon]

@pastel pivot is now following @wise spruce.

[tall adder]

YEAHHH

[wise spruce]

the sync is crazy

[tall adder]

thanks turab!!

[wise spruce]

THAT is a slick detail you caughttt amazin

thank youuu

turabb

[pastel pivot]

You are welcome

and its crazy to think I have a follower even without sharing anything lol

thnx for tht

[wise spruce]

W

[plain saddle]

@cloud girder

[crimson surge]

Adding my star up there cause this deserves it

[wise spruce]

thank youuu sooo m uchhhhh

[blissful mulch]

sounds so familiar, yet so different, a journey of my own ephemeral memorial of resting youth

[cloud girder]

Amazing! Absolutely reminded of things I wanted to forget, great work man❤️❤️

[tall adder]

so everyone had this one phase?
glad you liked it!!

[wise spruce]

dang, im happy u liked itt as well

[cloud girder]

I suppose we all do sadly

[keen matrix]

Wonderful! @cloud girder has just progressed to level 1!