Ambiguous Skies

[wise nimbus]

I can't fathom this deathly world—
Ambiguous skies that wouldn't stop whispering contradictions,
The cloud's ionization commenced marching
Leaving me to veil my eyes and into the shadows—
There I found solace, there I found my passion,
There I found sophisticated winds that blow not just breeze—
But zephyr's that carry knowledge for me to learn
And to know there are winds that yearn for my death.

[long creek]

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[long creek]

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[dull glacier]

dude tagged his entire bloodline 😭

[wise nimbus]

lmao

@mortal flower @wispy pecan

@jovial rock

@tranquil holly

[placid zinc]

Ooooo

I see

I like it

:))))

[wise nimbus]

thank you very much

[grim yarrow]

There is quality in it, it’s gonna be interesting to follow youre progress

[jovial rock]

Short but it does what it's meant to and really liked how it started with death then ended with death. Good job dave

[dull glacier]

I stuttered on some lines, and some did not have a comma, although the poem itself is good, id recommend using more commas 🫡

[wise nimbus]

@fallen tangle

[wise nimbus]

@noble herald

[noble herald]

If only I knew your story

[wise nimbus]

thanks

[wise nimbus]

don't forget to leave a star, thank u very much for reading the poem @noble herald i really appreciate it

[noble herald]

Nw

[tranquil holly]

The ending - and to know there are winds that yearn for my death
This stays and stings