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[tacit summit]

the precursor is really good

2nd para could really use some structure

besides that

love the jist of it

[golden stratus]

Thank you for the critique, it means alot

[patent blade]

Wonderful! @golden stratus has just progressed to level 1!

[lean bobcat]

oh. my. bleeps. i love the structure and the meaning, the thats part is so relatable aswell, "as long as you still want me around" that feeling is something else

[golden stratus]

Yeah, the person it's written about is amazing

[lean bobcat]

sounds like it (i hope that doesnt sound weird <3)

[golden stratus]

Oh no, not at all