Sunset series !

[split phoenix]

This series explores the dark truths of life i face and explores how an innocent child looks at the world and its darkness

Sunset series !

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(with this i conclude the sunset series and how with each vivid experience turned my world towards the darkness more and more but don’t fear the dark path i am taking you somewhere —-> read twilight after this)

@timber viper

[timber viper]

the poems are good guessing they are based on your personal expericences it captures the emotions well and the punctuations are on spot i think and i really loved the last poem loved how you made it rhymme and the message you were trying to convey

[split phoenix]

thnx they are like truth of my world and this is sunset so it ends in all darkness slowly with each poem do share your thoughts on twilight as well please

[timber viper]

WOWW niceee Good luck getting into yale wishing you the best

[split phoenix]

do you see potential? like will yale AO like these?

[timber viper]

no idea what yale likes but you gotta give it your best

[split phoenix]

i’ll try i’m currently working on sunrise series but it’s really in the raw form

read twilight it’s the closest to my heart

i have pinged you there

[split phoenix]

@jovial grove

read the sunset series as a start above , it has 3 poems

then go to twilight

and tell me your view

[jovial grove]

Its really good but as of review,try to end up with mid stanza having more metaphors as compared to last stanzas

[split phoenix]

hmm but the theme is like sunset , so it has to get the darkest in the end

i’ll look at it tho

they are still in like a lil rough form