#idea for a title and how to improve

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potent stag
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We get hurt. It's inevitable. But in that sharp sting, we find the proof that we are alive. We can always choose to see the beauty rather than the pain. We must learn to forgive, because only in that we learn to live.

To live is to struggle. To fall. To get up and then to fall again. But more than that, to live is to love, to forgive, and to attempt, time and time again. Because in attempting, we don't only discover the meaning of life we discover its beauty.

Forgiveness is the key to a peaceful life; Like opening a door, you have held shut with
resentment for years, that now radiates nothing but peace within yourself.

Resentment ignites a flurry of negativity — anger, frustration, confusion and indignation; it floods our minds and leads us with a lingering sense of injustice. But once we forgive? that is like unclenching a fist we held tight for years. Forgiveness gives us peace.

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also its for a writing contest for school and the theme is forgiveness

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the deadline is friday

spark ice
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Reformat it is my first advice, perhaps like this

We get hurt.
It's inevitable.
But in that sharp sting,
we find the proof that we are alive.

We can always choose to see the beauty
rather than the pain.

We must learn to forgive,
because only in that we learn to live.

To live is to struggle.
To fall.
To get up and then to fall again.
But more than that, to live is to love,
to forgive,
and to attempt
time and time again.

Because in attempting,
we don't only discover the meaning of life,
we discover its beauty.

Forgiveness is the key to a peaceful life;
Like opening a door you have held shut with
resentment for years,
that now radiates nothing but peace
within yourself.

Resentment ignites a flurry of negativity,
Anger,
Frustration,
Confusion
and indignation.

It floods our minds,
leads us with a lingering sense of injustice.

But once we forgive?
that is like unclenching a fist we held tight for years.

Forgiveness gives us peace.

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Could call the poem, peace in forgiveness

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@potent stag hope this is alright

potent stag
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thank you sm

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yess ill do that thank you for the help

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potent stag