Melody

[near oasis]

Actual title :"an ode to my guitar"

[near oasis]

@dire berry

[dire berry]

its very much relatable and i feel what you must have to get inspiration for this writing

i might give it a few tweaks here and there but i think it pushes the point across

though a little bit, it feels hastily written, like you wanted to write it down before you forget it and its neither rhyming nor free style

[odd linden]

Wonderful! @dire berry has just progressed to level 5!

[dire berry]

i myself suffer with that problem and can't seem to correct it yet

[jolly surge]

*i myself suffer

with that problem and can't seem

to correct it yet*

- _.notavampire

[near oasis]

Yess thank you for the feedback ill try to fix it

[near oasis]

@astral cairn

[near oasis]

@foggy acorn a bit different

[foggy acorn]

THIS IS FOR FUNSIES?!

IT'S ON PAR AS YOUR OTHER WORK!

Reading it gave me the chills, knowing damn well I wrote this kind of poem to my ex

Not as long but as definitive as words can describe

[near oasis]

:p thanks

Unfortunately human connection is out of my skill set so i wrote this for my guitar

[near oasis]

You’re gonna make my ego so big

[foggy acorn]

Let me tell you this much, if you did ended up writing for someone. The drawback of both joyous and despair is gut wrenching

[foggy acorn]

Oh please, it's good! I'm speaking genuinely as a fellow writer

[jolly surge]

*Oh please, it's good! I'm

speaking genuinely as

a fellow writer*

- c0m3d1es

[near oasis]

Ahahah I might someday it seriously inflating my confidence so much I feel like I should pay you for this

[near oasis]

Thanksssss

That’s what makes it better

Literally reading how meaningful your first posted poem is

I’m flattered

[foggy acorn]

You know what, why not. Let me merge two of my poems when I was with her and after, into one.