#𖤐The Summon of Amon

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The Totem of God

Part I — Mistress of the Ob
[Symbolism Segment : Tarot Major Arcana]
The Fool — Camael — https://discord.com/channels/944439929734312006/1475346629925273773
I. The Magician — The Summon of Amon — https://discord.com/channels/944439929734312006/1475681844824641700
II. The High Priestess — Daughter of the Church — https://discord.com/channels/944439929734312006/1471312203633135677
III. The Empress — Brood of Gaia — https://discord.com/channels/944439929734312006/1473170061366792192
IV. The Emperor — Query of the Noble — https://discord.com/channels/944439929734312006/1471738177428656210
V. The Hierophant — The Hanged Man! — https://discord.com/channels/944439929734312006/1474648621709529198
VI. The Lovers — Palace of Pulchritude —
VII. The Chariot — Conqueror to Conquest —
VIII. Strength — Gabriel —
IX. The Hermit — O, The Pestilence! —
X. Wheel of Fortune — The Thrones of Heaven —
XI. Justice — Azrael — https://discord.com/channels/944439929734312006/1472489226326245460
XII. The Hanged Man — The Hierophant! — https://discord.com/channels/944439929734312006/1473881065310519553
XIII. Death — Enigma — https://discord.com/channels/944439929734312006/1472071440798060699
XIV. Temperance — Providence of Ophanim — https://discord.com/channels/944439929734312006/1472786550537588787
XV. The Devil — The Immolation —
XVI. The Tower — Tower of Siloam —
XVII. The Star — Effulgent Star — #1473392172568023092 message
XVIII. The Moon — Comely Moon — https://discord.com/channels/944439929734312006/1473392172568023092
XIX. The Sun — Beauteous Sun — #1473392172568023092 message
XX. Judgment — Mock Piety — https://discord.com/channels/944439929734312006/1470856810305945714
XXI. The World — Vengeance — https://discord.com/channels/944439929734312006/1471021711397748769

By @subtle niche

⚠️Series Complete⚠️

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[ Amon(Aamon) is a Marqius of Lucifer or Hell, and is particularly known for his manipulation of fire (vomiting flames), and controls 40 legions of infernal demons. This poem is used to represent the evil, not to influence it. A demon is demonic and Amon is one controlled by Solomon in his Lesser Key of Solomon through the Sigil of Amon (and magic ring, which is an abomination). Avaunt to all cursèd demons! ]

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visual terrace
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And it's now done

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Holy moly fire series

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Genuinely good

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lunar dirge
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Few people keep the archaic tenor consistent, and I really appreciate how you mostly succeed. But I don’t understand the metre, especially in the second stanza (the feminine/unstressed “thee” and the masculine/stressed “-cree” in “decree” throw me off, too, and strain the rhyme for me). It just doesn’t feel regular enough to me to sound musical. Maybe I don’t get something, but my ear hears it as being off. My main compliment is for fully inhabiting the atmosphere you intend to create.

visual terrace
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if it IS supposed to be a specific metre then okay that's fair

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I didn't particularly scan for metre, i never really do, i just enjoyed the series for linguistic flavour

lunar dirge
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I really don’t know, I am quite conservative in this respect

visual terrace
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But I don't care too much for form or metre usually

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I like poetry of any metre and lack thereof

lunar dirge
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And some poems lack any fixed metre and oscillate heavily between counts of syllables, and stresses, and feet

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But still sound gorgeous

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lunar dirge
# visual terrace Such is true

Besides, seeing as the language is archaic, and I don’t know of any unmetrical use of such language when it was “in circulation”, I think the unmetricality of this poem works against the atmosphere

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lunar dirge
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subtle niche
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why dont we follow each other? i forsee us being great friends

lunar dirge
subtle niche
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thats just fine man

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lunar dirge
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I just need to figure out how to follow someone lol

subtle niche
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./follow godismyblood

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and remove #0000

lunar dirge
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Damn

subtle niche
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well uh you cannot run a command with a period

lunar dirge
subtle niche
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i mean your profficiency is frightening

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subtle niche
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ayy you got it