Bizarre tongue woman

[fringe quarry]

Bizarre tongue woman

The man's eyelids froze stunned—smooth, buttery,
skin bathed in milk, deep blue ocean eyes
Where stars glisten, a galaxy clustered within

His tongue moved, "An ethereal on the Earth."
"Am I gazing at a heaven-sent angel, my lady?"

Across her brow, a red static line popped—
Her mouth opened a little then—
"What, you haven't spoken about me?"

Like a shooting star, a hand—no!—a shell.
BAM! landed on the right-mid section of the
mouth and rounded, widened, dotted eyes

Cold sweat, he shifted one hundred eighty degrees.
His feet bam bam, the woman, her tresses—
Scaling heads smoking fire, her mouth,
Speak, "Run, you handsome man, I love you."

Folks came, and the girl's mouth yelled.
"Enemies! You where?" the folks say.
"It's our world; walk slow opposite,
To the footprints, to our not bizarre world."

Don't take woman words what she is saying

Take opposite of it

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[floral jetty]

Hey, I just read your piece, and I really appreciated the intensity and imagination in it. The way you merge the surreal imagery—the mechanical giant, the sudden shocks, and her galaxy-like eyes—creates a chaotic but immersive experience. I felt the tension between awe and confusion, like the characters are both drawn to and overwhelmed by the moment. I’m curious, what made you choose to combine such explosive imagery with these quiet, intimate gestures?

[fringe quarry]

You didn't got it

The woman is from bizzare world

[fringe quarry]

A magazine

[floral jetty]

Hey, sorry, I didn’t quite catch that 😅… I’m not familiar with the ‘bizarre world.’ Could you explain a bit more? I really want to understand it better!

[fringe quarry]

You see the image I share?

Bizzare means opposite, meaning the girl words mean opposite and what she hear is also opposite meaning to her

So he complimenting her is actually in her mind insulting her

[floral jetty]

Ah, I see now! So in her bizarre world, everything is reversed—what she hears and what she says flips meanings. That makes the piece even more intriguing and chaotic. Really makes me think about perception and misunderstanding.

[fringe quarry]

Yeah, magazine theme was tongue and they like twist in poems so I made this

[chilly lantern]

*Yeah, magazine theme

was tongue and they like twist in

poems so I made this*

- yami4876

[fringe quarry]

Hope this get accepted

[floral jetty]

Ah, that makes sense! I really like how you played with twists and reversals—it adds so much depth and intrigue to the poem. I hope it gets accepted too!

[fringe quarry]

Thanks

[floral jetty]

Anytime! Really enjoyed reading it 😊

[fringe quarry]

@median sapphire

[potent osprey]

I LOVED ITTT

SO FASCINATINGGG

10/10

i love the skin bathed in milk line

[fringe quarry]

thankyou

[potent osprey]

would you take a look at a poem i wrote

[fringe quarry]

sure

[potent osprey]

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[fringe quarry]

@tough fractal

[fringe quarry]

@ocean cliff

[tough fractal]

i love how this feels like a narration with the 2nd paragraph, how bizzare it all is for a woman too

im kinda feeling eepr as HEEEYL today since i got exams coming but its really nice

[fringe quarry]

You read messages right, the woman is bizzare that why her sentences are wring syntax

[ocean cliff]

@fringe quarry Took me quite a while to understand this one. But it's cool to write in such a twisted way.