My checkmate

[pulsar hound]

This feels like it rests between the liminal space of flirty and threatening, and I love that immensely.

[brave citrus]

Thank you!

[pure chasm]

It sounds like it could be the lyrics of a good song!! The repetition of 'lining you up' builds so much tension. It feels very bold and cinematic

[brave citrus]

Ohhh heavy dramatic piano
(because boy!)
Piano mellows to almost a lullaby
I'm probably going, to rip-right-through-you-now

[runic field]

This reads like hip hop

I don't usually comment on others work but this caught my attention