a molecule's consent

[real ingot]

add stanzas and capitalization so it’s easier to read and understand

[wanton oyster]

@dull falcon

[wanton oyster]

the lack of stanzas is a stylistic choice to represent the breathlessness of the narrator

[dull falcon]

nothing to critique i love it

[dull falcon]

exactly

it means to be suffocating to read right?

[wanton oyster]

yesh

[wanton oyster]

thankyou

[dull falcon]

good poem

i started writting only 5 months ago

how long have you been writting for?

[wanton oyster]

since may last year!

[dull falcon]

ohhh you came a long way, it’s a very pretty poem, be proud of it ^^

[latent grove]

*ohhh you came a long

way, it’s a very pretty

poem, be proud of it ^^*

- Gnopo | Nirvana’s Knight

[wanton oyster]

sank you 😄