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[daring chasm]

Love.
Absolutely love.

May I add another prose ?

[mystic fjord]

certainly!

[daring chasm]

Lucifer's POV

A pretty face, full of lies
A sweet sweet dream, echoing cries
Shadows of lullabies
And fire, within my eyes

I rest peacefully in my vessel,
LUCIFER! It's walls roared
God's justice has been bestowed

To the hells I was banished
Magnanimous, still...in my new habit
I reign thy desires
Bow before me. I am your sire

Just a little monologue....
Like Lucifer's response and no repentance to being banished

[mystic fjord]

if you were to concentrate the idea originally attempted to communicate with this piece, how would you do so?

like a summary almost.

[daring chasm]

You want me to make it into a rhyming poem ?

[mystic fjord]

no, im asking for the concentrate on your writing

[delicate axle]

Wonderful! @mystic fjord has just progressed to level 1!

[mystic fjord]

think of it like this: you're turning the piece into a segment of a play and must simplify it to be concise whilst still keeping the original emotion and intent

[daring chasm]

Aye aye captain

Just a question tho.
What exactly is Lucifer's sheathless brand ?
His name itself ?
Or something auxillary?

[mystic fjord]

i can explain the context in dms

i'd rather keep it open to interpretation here.