#Honey Bun!

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candid yacht
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Some time ago I met a girl
A thousand miles wide
A beauty out in Nordic land
With lovely magnet eyes

We talked a bunch at first but then
The silent killer rose
It starts to bloom a saddening heart
From deep within my soul.

Perhaps I placed misguided thoughts
In how this thing should be
I really think this friendship’s torn
Apart from what I see.

Guess I just wanted more with her;
She didn’t feel the same.
It happens time and time again—
This painful fate to blame.

No anger here, I loved the time
I hope improvements surge
Inside your life and also mine
I stand by every word.

Your sweetness bought me joyful days
I wish I borrowed more
Your art is nice to see and share
I hope there’s more in store.

"My honey bun, and sunny one",
I wish it could've been
The beauty out from Nordic lands
I want to see again.

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@terse obsidian

terse obsidian
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first of all, i really enjoyed this simple sweet tale of love and i am glad to see the stanza rhyme that make sense. really nice imagery of a fairy tale ! i hope there is a part two for this haha. thank you for tagging me wonderful poet !!

terse obsidian
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@heavy crane awaiting your reviews brother !

heavy crane