screenplay

[subtle river]

take two! pls dont be mad at me the art of poetry discord mods i am simply just a girl

[misty gull]

ditto

[covert flume]

This piece is a disturbing and compelling meditation on authorship, control, and self-erasure, where the act of creation becomes an act of consumption. The recursive structure—story watching itself, rewriting itself, burning itself—successfully traps the reader inside the same loop as the narrator. Your imagery is visceral and symbolic, especially the lace, ink, screen, and butterfly, which together suggest transformation promised but repeatedly denied. The tension between creator and subject blurs convincingly, making it unclear who holds power by the end. At times the density of metaphor overwhelms clarity, but the emotional intent never wavers. Overall, it reads like a psychological descent rendered through art itself, unsettling precisely because it refuses escape.

[subtle river]

glad you were able to analyze my text so thoroughly! i really like your analysis 💗💗

[wanton thicket]

This is pretty cool actually

Keep it up

[waxen trench]

It’s so good!! Really interesting I loved reading it