#Why is love a sin

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upper parcel
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Why is love a sin

Why can't I feel normal in my own skin

They say love is beautiful

Well at least if it's straight love, if it's not it's distasteful

weary roost
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Ts lwk peak

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I have one singular suggestion for the last line somewhat

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there's actually a 70% chance I'm wrong since I'm illiterate

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I think it needs to be split or use a comma

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but I like the overall theme

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again I'm probably wrong

upper parcel
weary roost
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I like the poem

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it reminds me of the time my friend was lwk dissing neopronouns💔 The enemy was closer than he thought

upper parcel
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Dang