#Why is love a sin
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Ts lwk peak
I have one singular suggestion for the last line somewhat
there's actually a 70% chance I'm wrong since I'm illiterate
I think it needs to be split or use a comma
but I like the overall theme
again I'm probably wrong
Ty
I like the poem
it reminds me of the time my friend was lwk dissing neopronouns💔 The enemy was closer than he thought
Dang