wide bluff
Kab tak dekhu mai uske ghar ka rasta
Pith pr jo rakha mere chota basta
Dil ae tuta aashiq hun
Ghumta hun hasta hasta
Par Bhula nhi mai abhi yad hai
mujhe uske ghar ka rasta
Tum jo pakdo mera hath
Bit jayegi ye zindagi ek pal me
Agr tum jo bat lo hamse apna rasta aur
Fir ho jayegi zindagi bhi aasan
Agar sath me hamare apka wasta
_xrudra
indigo osprey
Kab tak dekhu mai uske ghar ka rasta
Pith pr jo rakha mere chota basta
Dil ae tu...
While sadly I don't know urdu/hindi, I at least enjoy the rhyming. Certain sounds I imagine for example for rasta & basta echoing.
I like the line "tum jo pakdo mera hath", has unique syllables stress metric (1 1 2 2 1), like the drum tambourine shifting its pace.
I'm not personally however really fan on long sentences, especially without punctuations (though I can still read it well cause the syllabless stress beat metric)
But then again, I don't know how other language punctuates work, so it's just me
zealous breach
Kab tak dekhu mai uske ghar ka rasta
Pith pr jo rakha mere chota basta
Dil ae tu...
Achi h but like poetry is short one liners and in sync mostly to Thora wesa nhi h
wide bluff
Ji