forest sage
That last stanza stands out to me as off. The first sentence of the last stanza is fragmented. It’s the preamble to a sentence but ends on a period before it gets to the last line. Then the last line starts with “And” as the first word of that sentence. As a personal rule I don’t start a sentence with “And” but that is your call to make.
Overall it has a whimsical style that I enjoyed.
primal maple