#Love

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slim frigate
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Waking up at dawn, it feels like spring,
My restless heart won’t stop its wing.
Is it you, or just my lonely view?
Oh love, I can’t keep waiting for you.

In winter nights, our feelings stay,
Waiting for light to break the gray.
The years drift on, then fade away,
You stand far, at the harbor’s bay.

A devoted heart,so pure, so true,
Makes every soul fall hard for you.

Happiness plays no favorites, dear,
It’s shared by every heart that’s near.
Our love drifts close, then far apart,
Yet always blends in every heart.

I blame myself, too amorous, too deep,
For all the words I whispered to you.
Joy was here, you still stand near,
Yet I miss you when spring draws near.

My love, do you even know?
These feelings in my heart still glow.

Our sweet days just drift and fly,
Like gentle wind passing through the sky.
The days slip by, I cherish more,
This love I’ve learned to adore.

Oh darling, I love you endlessly.

By your side, I ask you, “Are you happy?"
My heart sings loud in love’s sweet way.
Saying “I love you” never feels waste,
Every moment is beauty traced.

Your love’s a dream, thin and light,
With wishes whispered every night.
Promise me now, just say it real,
You’ll never leave, I need you.

One life I’m yours, I gladly say,
One life you’re mine, forever stay.
Our words of love will never fade,
Tomorrow holds no regrets, just grace.

Moonlight glows through thin mist,
Your shadow draws my heart within.
Some loves turn dark, some ache so deep,
Yet paint soft beauty for us to keep.

Our love like leaves that drift so far,
Floating with clouds beyond each star.
If we must fly so aimlessly,
My love, don’t ever leave me be.

small dagger
azure idol
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My restless heart won’t stop its wing. --- this line could be improved because ummm "wing" isn't a verb or something. Like, i think it's like almost grammatically wrong to use the word "wing" like that. Tbh I like the sincerity of the poem, and emotion but it goes on for too long I think. I would try to cut it down to keep the emotion real.