loud bane
sun's smear of butter
melts leisurely
into the sky's grumbling
underbelly.
reflections gathered
around my feet, lapping
the pink gold lemonade
squeezed and salted
by the waves,
and at the horizon, meeting
the azure abyss ahead,
beckon my sapped limbs
to push
off this splintered
shoreline
and swim
Painting:
Bermagui
Bridie McBride
Oil on board
90 x 60 cm
ca. 2020s
sharp vergeBOT
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limpid herald
I didn't understood the meaning of words but I do got imagery
limpid herald
sun's smear of butter
melts leisurely
into the sky's grumbling
underbelly.
ref...
You wanna know which one I am gonna write a poem on
loud bane
I didn't understood the meaning of words but I do got imagery
heh.. did i make it too abstract? :,)
limpid herald
heh.. did i make it too abstract? :,)
No
loud bane
You wanna know which one I am gonna write a poem on
which one ! ^.^
limpid herald
The first lines just were for me to difficult to understand
But I always find difficult to even calculate these themes in written
loud bane
One of this two
niceee looking forward to reading it!
dawn questBOT
niceee looking forward to reading it!
Wonderful! @loud bane has just progressed to level 17!
limpid herald
That stone is a duck face like
I stand here watching the centuries as it passes
People call me duck rock
Yeah something like that
It also seems like a seagull though
ember oracle
This is the winning poem for https://discord.com/channels/944439929734312006/1457450189290733832 ! Congratulations and thank you 💚
full sedge
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loud bane
This is the winning poem for https://discord.com/channels/944439929734312006/145...
thank you!! this is such a lovely surprise. im so grateful and honoured :,) it means a lot to be chosen among so many beautiful pieces by the talented poets here. i really loved reading everyone's work ♡ thank you for hosting the contest!
slim lantern
🙂
proper wyvern
BEAUTIFULLL
sturdy matrix
sun's smear of butter
melts leisurely
into the sky's grumbling
underbelly.
ref...
This is gorgeous
unkempt wind
even the poets handle is a poetic device..
how did you sibilance soup and sun..
lost tangle
I love the imagery in this poem
pastel dust
Omg I love love love thissss. You’re really good at describing imagery!! “Lapping the pink gold lemonade squeezed and salted by the waves” YEAA GOO BROOO. I love how every element connects so beautifully. You describe everything as it has life, “sun’s smear of butter melts leisurely” like omg it really does look just like that
Looking forward to reading more of your work! Got inspired by this 💖
lilac plumeBOT
near gulch
This one is one of those poems that just begs to be recited aloud.
Very beautiful. Bravo
vital jungle
This is very lovely ❤️
bold pulsar
i can taste the picture now
orange marmalade,
words that bring oil to palate,
art shall thee now taste.
lilac plumeBOT
bold pulsar
This is very lovely ❤️
hiii. im new too! by wierd people you mean?
you said no dms from wierd people
im a concept, do i count?
quaint wing
i really liked this poem ! it read really nice, its a poem that i could say out loud over and over again and not get sick of.
limpid isle
beautiful, heartfelt. 10/10 - PRESTO
