“Die for you”

[vernal moth]

You tell me you would die for me.
Destroy the world and turn it barren.
Crush the world until it’s nothing but a memory.
But won’t you live for me?
Walk across the patches of flowers with me?
Walk through my emotions one by one and understand me?
Treat yourself better and learn to love yourself for me?
Learn to trust and dance with me?
Give those that deserve kindness the love they deserve for me?
Even if I were to be gone if my memories were to disappear.
I would want you to live for me.
Learn to be kind to yourself for me.
Learn to admire the stars for me.
Eat 3 meals a day for me.
Appreciate the things around you for me.
Rest well for me.
Even if the days are cold there won’t be one where I won’t be walking it with you.
And.
Please.
Love yourself like I love you, for me.
Because even if my soul is no longer in my body.
Our souls will dance for eternity as long as you’re living for me.
There won’t be a day where my arms are never around you while you walk through flowers of roses.

[compact jolt]

Wow. Just beautiful

[sonic night]

Damn bruh, It's so much amazing. Your concept is excellent. Everyone in love talks about dying for each other but no one looks on this side. your idea is so much lovely. I love it.
I think you should but a comma in this line before for me. 'Love yourself like I love you for me.'

[vernal moth]

I'm glad you like it I'll do that for you

[orchid plover]

Absolutely beautiful, I love the concept in your piece. I think it would definitely be harder but more rewarding to let yourself be complete overtaken by love than by death.

[proven smelt]

Just awesome. If just all the girls were like this poem.

[dull plank]

*Great job...but girls ain't

like this lmfao..but ain't you

gonna promote that?*

- jame_clark

[wild glacier]

What if this could go both ways? I believe it should reach both girls and boys.

[dull plank]

*What if this could go

both ways? I believe it should

reach both girls and boys.*

- zzz_l0v3

[proven smelt]

I agree

[deep grove]

Wonderful! @proven smelt has just progressed to level 3!

[vernal moth]

This is very much both ways of course it’s always how you the reader views it

[rancid turtle]

This is so much beautiful and amazingly unique concept. I love it.

[vernal moth]

Thank you I’m really glad you love it it’s definitely one of my best works I’d say

[rancid turtle]

It definitely is. The idea of living for someone is more tragic than dying or killing for someone. So it's undeniably outstanding.

[vernal moth]

It can absolutely be more tragic during the circumstances I always found it interesting on how so many people would say that and I wondered. What if I decided to show the other view of the person that is being told “I would die for you.” What if they didn’t want that?

[rancid turtle]

Offcourse, no one even wants that. I wonder about the same thing. And to be honest, living, truly living for someone is more haunting and tragic.

[vernal moth]

In some scenarios and for some people living for someone else is one of the hardest things to do and I wanted to put the emotions of someone asking for that into this

[rancid turtle]

Yeah, it is one of the hardest task, I'd say. And you've portrayed it well.

[dull plank]

*Yeah, it is one of

the hardest task, I'd say. And

you've portrayed it well.*

- i_mna