#I am, yet again, in distress.

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lavish whale
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I am living such fulfilling life; i go to bed with my stomach full, my heart content.

While my younger siblings suffer; their stomach growling from hunger, their hearts and minds never at ease

I, pay no mind to their suffering, for i have forsaken such young beings; unwillingly

Forgive me, oh, my little ones, for i have failed you, yet, again

( PS, this may be the first piece of work I've written, and i am hoping to learn and would appreciate criticism; this is just raw emotions of mine. )

lofty jacinth
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I am quite intrigued about what could be the context behind this. I'm assuming the author may have a strained relationship with the said younger siblings?

stark venture
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I feel like your describing the pain that you feel for failing them but also describing how you get what you need well they suffer and you dont want to go back and not have the things you need. Am i right?