Family Blues | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

hasty plinth Dec 25, 2025, 4:14 PM

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How I miss the sound of you.
On this day of joy I'm blue.

Its lonely and dark this time of year.
I'm having a hard time without you here.

I'm crying tears of sorrow.
Knowing for us their is no tomorrow.
If only someones strength I could borrow.

This year is cold and distant.
I wish I could see you this instant.

I wish for this Christmas to be with you.
To one last time before the morning dew.
To hug you tight and see your smile.
That we will be together all the while.
To turn back time just one year.
But its too late I fear.
I just wish you were here.

vital veldt Dec 25, 2025, 4:16 PM

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this is a wholesome poem, no doubt .

hasty plinth Dec 25, 2025, 4:17 PM

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vital veldt this is a wholesome poem, no doubt .

thanks ^^ I uh hope if anyone relates it just helps them feel less alone.

burnt badger Dec 25, 2025, 4:17 PM

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This is my first year not visiting family for the holidays so just alone cleaning house. Thanks for sharing. ^_^

placid hemlock Dec 25, 2025, 4:20 PM

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hasty plinth How I miss the sound of you. On this day of joy I'm blue. Its lonely and dark t...

I wish for Christmas to be with you, not i wish for Christmas is to be

hasty plinth Dec 25, 2025, 4:21 PM

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placid hemlock I wish for Christmas to be with you, not i wish for Christmas is to be

its cut off purposely ><

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OMG Im sorry yep grammar error sorry I had a draft with a cut off sentence

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My brain is like so dead rn ><

placid hemlock Dec 25, 2025, 4:22 PM

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hasty plinth its cut off purposely ><

Why

placid hemlock Dec 25, 2025, 4:22 PM

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hasty plinth My brain is like so dead rn ><

Its ok

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I liked the poem

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Poems that expresses feelings of distance are good

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But the writer must be an expert to send the message in the right way that will reach the readers mind

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