Lone town

[late epoch]

A traveller on a lone night
A sky of star couples now centred on a single moon
The plants are a colour grey and white
Some shine yellow like suns glow on moon

Tis a town for the lone,
For the movers of soul and bone.
Heart grows on a thinkers mind
It's a fruit for many, a curse for those travellers
One that tests the testament of time

Mumbles the traveller,
Moving on his own lonesome path.

[tiny spire]

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[late epoch]

@true basin

[empty prairie]

coool poem jesterr
lobe the mood nd setting :0

you move between night, moon, plants, town, heart, fruit, time... all goob individually but you could tighten the connections bw them

i think
Some shine yellow like suns glow on moon
->
Some shine yellow, like suns borrowed by the moon
clarifies the image and avoids stiffness

[true basin]

Aye,
A testament of time it is,
What wondrous words you have used to portray the insights of lonely souls.

Just beautiful

[late epoch]

Yeah I made it randomly thanks thonos

[empty prairie]

Its too coool to be made randomly :0 demnn

[late epoch]

I did but

Me and my friend were doing a thing where we randomly make a quote or poem

I made this piece

And i thought i should post it

[late epoch]

I made around 3 or 4 before this

Oh god i yap sm💔

[empty prairie]

demnn, i havent written anything in months lol

[empty prairie]

keep yapping 🗣️
thats a gooob habit

[pastel osprey]

really beautiful poem, I had to read it a few times over
your figurative language is beautiful 💜