The River Of My Heart

[opal shell]

It begins like a river carrying a name,
A love story of a man and a woman never written the same.
Two hearts collided beneath the open sky,
I kept seeing the girl pass by.

Even if I never reach your heart,
I will keep loving a silent art.
The road of my life still stretches long,
Your memory shines like an endless song.

[orchid dew]

It's nice my dear. you can continue it.

[opal shell]

Thanks

[bleak wren]

Kinda depicts one sided love soo beautifully I loved it and I really enjoy short poems more than long ones

[opal shell]

I have changed in 2nd line

[opal shell]

Yes thanks for that

[bleak wren]

makes more sense

[opal shell]

Ys

[placid storm]

beautiful rhyme it is
nice short poem and full of sense of rhythm
images are great too
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