pliant robin
The floor of my bathroom is cold,
hard against my child face
I don’t know why
I’m laying here
Other than
“I’m not okay”
My gaze is blank
mind just numb
I don’t know why
I’m quite this sad
I wish somebody
would lay here with me
Comfort this child
and set them free
It’s hard to tell
If anybody loves me
I don’t know why
they keep pretending
-A.G
@ebon latch
ebon latch
The floor of my bathroom is cold,
hard against my child face
I don’t know why
...
other than
pliant robin
ah thanks
pliant robin
ty !!
ebon latch
i would try and play more with contrast if you could
pliant robin
oo okay
ebon latch
like the floor of my bathroom is cold hard against my burning sinnless kin
skin
something like that
pliant robin
like the floor of my bathroom is cold hard against my burning sinnless kin
:O
thats really good
pliant robin
you are very very talented
primal bolt
The floor of my bathroom is cold,
hard against my child face
I don’t know why
...
I love the ending of the first stanza
‘I’m quite this sad’ sounds off imo I’d suggest switching the phrasing
Third stanza is peak
pliant robin
I love the ending of the first stanza
‘I’m quite this sad’ sounds off imo I’d s...
alright ty!!
manic heart
Peak omg ima be ur no 1 fan😭
