#Your Gone

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proud temple
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I want you. I want you back, my friend.
For I am restless; my nights are restless.
I look outside, day may just now come.
But it's only longing, and I am restless.

My lord knows of my lonely art.
That's how hard I smile as a star.
Oh my friend, I still needed you.
Why did you leave me so early on?

At first, I had just wanted you back.
That even bones would have kept me strapped
That my life with me would again be franked
At first, I just needed my pieces back.

My friend, the eyes are wet.
The heart is fed and on dread.
You know the longing of one's you left behind?
How the people are , you left behind?

Your grave, it still haunts me.
You lie dead; still, it haunts me.
I still cannot forget you, look.
Your memories still haunt me.

The crying of the family is here.
The moments of you still live here.
Your things, Your family are here.
The missing is you, you're not here.

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@surreal wigeon

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@signal hollow

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@trim badger

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@mild plank

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@summer verge

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@velvet leaf

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@carmine escarp

surreal wigeon
proud temple
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@flat swan

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@austere moat

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@young thorn

surreal wigeon
proven lichenBOT
surreal wigeon
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It was back in April

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I'm really sorry for your loss

proud temple
surreal wigeon
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May he rest in peace

proud temple
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Yes

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@cedar pulsar

cedar pulsar
proud temple
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Thank you

proud temple
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@unreal bison

trim badger
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im sorry for your loss 🫂 this poem is painful yet written beautifully

young thorn
proud temple
proud temple
young thorn
proud temple
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That couplet was it was some what,
From daddy comebcak

young thorn
proud temple
young thorn
proud temple
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Thanks

proud temple
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@tired blaze

tired blaze
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hey sorry for the late response here. Initially i thought you miss-took your for you’re in the title but seeing as you spelt it correctly in the last line, im unsure now. Good structure, this is intimate, honest, private, i enjoyed it