return (islamic poem)

[still wave]

as salaam alaikum (may peace be upon you)
I gave this a try and it's my first time writing anything like this so I would really appreciate feedback and I know some people aren't really a fan of Islam so for them I don't mind just completely ignore this text and sorry if I bothered and for the others I hope you like this poem (I'm aware of the grammar mistake so we'll js ignore that for now)

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[still wave]

also could anyone explain why this came up and which content

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I hope you don't mind the pings

[unkempt mountain]

@wise cradle youre here?

[wise cradle]

very minor correction: i think you should capitalize the word "lord" because it changes the meaning linguistically. but overall, its good.

[wise cradle]

yeh

[unkempt mountain]

how are you

[wise cradle]

fine wbu

[unkempt mountain]

good

[wise cradle]

your from yellow islam server right?

[unkempt mountain]

yes

[wise cradle]

noice

[unkempt mountain]

you too

[still wave]

yes thank you

[wise cradle]

[still wave]

would appreciate a star

[wise cradle]

there you go

[lusty badge]

amazing

[sly gust]

I am not Muslim but this is beautiful there are many things I like about Islam, and one of them is the devotion that many of it’s followers display. This poem shows your devotion and gratitude very gracefully.

[novel osprey]

This is just beautiful

[urban bison]

ya Allah this is beautiful. i needed someone to remind me of these. thank you thank you thank you sister

[still wave]

@rough lagoon

[mellow sierra]

ts is peak

[still wave]

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@pale siren

I might update this one btw but I would like feedback

[cyan night]

*I might update this

one btw but

I would like feedback*

- youdonknowme

[pale siren]

This feels more like a narrative paragraph rather than a poem

Also in the first stanza id change the layout slightly to
"and i replied,
My lord knows im a sinner ..

Just helps the flow better

[north kraken]

Wonderful! @pale siren has just progressed to level 16!

[still wave]

yes will do thank you

[still wave]

@ocean vale

@keen niche I hope you don't mind the ping, but I'd appreciate if you could leave feedback on this as I feel like I could improve on this one

[ocean vale]

I really like this one! it rhymes a lot and makes me think...

[still wave]

@spark pumice

[spark pumice]

i love itttt also your rhyme scheme is impeccable

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[mellow sierra]

hey would you like some or any feedback at all from me