#Where'd my map go

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vapid nest
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Standing on a highway
Which way to go
I wouldn’t know

My map’s gone
So I stand there
On the highway

Waiting for someone
To tell me where to go

Cars honk at me
I’m in their way
I don’t move

I can’t move
I can’t leave this place
What if my map comes back
What if it decides it wants me anyway

I feel glued in place
What if I won't ever be able to move again
I’m okey with standing here for now

Because there’s nowhere worth going
If I’m not going there with my map
If I’m not going there with you.

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worldly adder
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Wowwwwww

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One of my favs from you

somber fractal
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I really do like this poem, and I do see the message of it. I believe that this poem is one of your best works and the feeling of not knowing where to go without the "map" is a very good use of anthropomorphism. There are some parts I would like to mention for future reference as things you could fix, though it's mostly spelling issues. no where should be one word "nowhere", okey is spelt "okay", and you had a small typo in one line where it was supposed to say move but was spelt mave. Other than those few things, this poem is probably one of my favorites from you.

vapid nest
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however

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the okey

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is a little inside joke

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with 'my map'