One Drop | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

minor ivy Dec 4, 2025, 2:51 PM

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Just give me a drop of attention
And I'll feel alright
Just give me a small sign
And I'll sleep tonight

All the words you said
Add up to nothing
But the songs you showed me
Will live on in my mind

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@torn pivot

torn pivot Dec 4, 2025, 3:08 PM

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nice one!

minor ivy Dec 4, 2025, 9:25 PM

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thanks

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sorry i'm so late with the reply

torn pivot Dec 4, 2025, 9:28 PM

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No problem

minor ivy Dec 4, 2025, 9:29 PM

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could you be more critical please?

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I really wanna improve

deep silo Dec 5, 2025, 11:00 AM

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I like this one

still nicheBOT Dec 5, 2025, 11:00 AM

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Wonderful! @deep silo has just progressed to level 1!

torn pivot Dec 5, 2025, 1:35 PM

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focus less on rhyming rn and just write longer more expressed poems

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