I wrote this because it snowed | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

fluid solstice Dec 4, 2025, 5:05 AM

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This is one of my first attempts at applying “the rules” of poetry, so please give me a lot of feedback INNOCENT

young light Dec 4, 2025, 5:39 AM

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Well reading it feels good but I'm struggling to understand what's it about

fluid solstice Dec 4, 2025, 5:40 AM

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It was an assignment to write about a character without explicitly saying who it’s about

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I guess I didn’t communicate very well since my sister said the same thing as you

young light Dec 4, 2025, 5:42 AM

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I mean the first verse is still understandable. But I blacked out on the 2nd one.
Is it a continuation of first or is it independent?

proud inlet Dec 4, 2025, 6:41 AM

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this is nicely written! i thought it was clear who you were writing about. also flows quite nicely

chrome stone Dec 4, 2025, 10:00 AM

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This was very good👏

#I wrote this because it snowed