oblique crane
O’Rosa an’Dianthus, akin o’flowers,
A’diff o’soul.
Aspirations of love, acclimations of hours,
That thy loves true: two are whole.
O’Dianthus of Winter sights;
Thy chilled clutch, oh sweet kiss;
O’Rosa of Summer nights;
Thy eternal ardor, oh sharp miss.
O’Gracious red, flowered red;
Love is symbolized.
O’gracious bloom, flowered bright;
Love is actualized.
O’Rosa an’Dianthus of differing name,
Yet true red and sweet, ‘love’ we proclaim.
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solid rover
good iambic syllabic verse!! you definitely hit the mark with that.
lavish sigil
Thou speakest in a manner,
Of a true ancient one,
For after reading thy poem,
Mine heart was stunned.
oblique crane
Thank you so much you guys! I felt that I was using too many vowels as an easy out for iambic and then had to use more-so archaic words to get the meaning with rhyme and iambic. Glad I could stun you!
terse cedarBOT
Thank you so much you guys! I felt that I was using too many vowels as an easy o...
Wonderful! @oblique crane has just progressed to level 1!
lavish sigil
Thank you so much you guys! I felt that I was using too many vowels as an easy o...
Umm, I didn't mean girl by the way, sorry
oblique crane
Lol, no worries at all!
lavish sigil
Mighst I mention thee within mine poems too..
oblique crane
You verily mighteth!
lavish sigil
Whispering: Such a royal tone
oblique crane
Mighst I mention thee within mine poems too..
Mayeth I mention thee in mine own poems also?
lavish sigil
Exams goin on right now,
But you may.
oblique crane
Thou speakest in a manner,
Of a true ancient one,
For after reading thy poem,
Mi...
I almost realized something, but I'm glad "red" and "bright" rhyme!
lavish sigil
Aye
They really rhyme, iff
You read them with the previous word,
Like the whole line together.
oblique crane
Mighteth be the blind
Leading the blind here, but thy
Is onto something!
tough rainBOT