Parable of Hope

[novel belfry]

I ask myself: What does hope look like?

And I answer:
It is a blank white wall, shining like sunlight;
It is a full moon reflecting rays of the sun;
It is a canvas yet to be painted by bright colors;
And it is a mind yet to be filled with abundant dreams.

So, what does hope look like?

It is nothing
but a mirror
reflecting
everything.

[tiny sleet]

Nice job :p

[novel belfry]

Thank u

[tiny sleet]

Np and honestly speaking i like how it’s straight up but also how you used metaphors

[novel belfry]

@jolly stag @thorn rain

[wary fox]

YESS OKAAY

[iron zenith]

Wonderful! @wary fox has just progressed to level 1!

[wary fox]

oo yay!

U ATE

[novel belfry]

Sankyuuu

[jolly stag]

I love this portrayal of hope you have. It's warm and bright and indeed could be a canvas

[grave jolt]

Good poem 👏

[novel belfry]

Tyyy

[thorn rain]

This is really warm, vivid and very hopeful

I like it very much gng

[novel belfry]

Ty Dave

[daring thicket]

Ouu this is a beautiful way of looking at hope. I like the idea that hope depends on what we make of it.

I love the way you write :D

[novel belfry]

Thank uuu

[novel belfry]

@versed plover

[versed plover]

A short, yet such a beautiful poem.. kudos!

[novel belfry]

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[wind rose]

Damn that was beautiful!

I definitely want to try this form.

The metaphors, the rhythm, the structure, bros too good at this. My favorite line is

"it is a mind yet to be filled with abundant dreams"

[novel belfry]

Thank youuu lmao

That's also my favorite line too cause that was actually inspired from an abstract painting my teacher showed me